Undiscovered

Hey Durden,

This is a very emotive track, to say the least. Unfortunately, I don't know the original, so I hope that doesn't take away from any of my comments.

I like the flow of the track over all, with all the components (percussion, bass, etc...) building nicely. I also like the wee "breakdown" - well placed. As I said, I don't know the original, so I can't really tell what you've kept, and what you've added / changed. In my personal opinion, I think it's a little on the harsh side as far as overall sound goes. By that I mean it sounds a bit too metallic for my liking. I don't know if that's just the EQ-ing, or indeed if that's the sound you were after (as I said, this is just my humble opinion ), but I think a deeper, fuller sounding bass-line, and a softening of the electro sound (mostly the electric guitar riff sound) would work nicely. Anyway, I ended up listening to this track about 5 times in a row, which tells you something in itself!

Nice work, man. Keep it up.

McBrowntrout

p.s. ever think of f*cking around with the vocals? I think it could really be a mind warper if you did........