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Bjorky

PredamnOvakill
Tue, 08/04/2008 - 10:23pm Style
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Another one I'm still touching up here and there.

My friend made a song (which wasn't techno) and said 'Oi Ben, You should make a techno remix of my song!'

So I did, and here is the result.

I gave it a new tune, faster beat, But same Chords as his song.

Comments welcome (as they are on all my songs)

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  • Length: 3:51 minutes (3.52 MB)
  • Format: MP3 Stereo 44kHz 128Kbps (CBR)
  • Plays: 60
  • Downloads: 0

Comments

Boeko added
Wed, 23/04/2008 - 2:16am
The chord progression is

The chord progression is good m8. pretty much a standard punter synth line. \,,/ (><)\,,/ The energy is definitely there.
The overall sound is not quite right imho. The synths are way to overpowering, and drown out the little drum beats that there are in this track.
A whole lot more variation with the drumline, and the synths is essential. The octave progression kept me interested for the first minute or so, but then it got kinda repetitive.
Some fat raunchy lower synth sounds would be another good variation to it I think.
So, if the synths were toned down, variated -- the drumline punched up a bit with some more meat, I think this would make a good gabber track.

-Cheers
~Boeko

http://www.subtlerecordings.com
http://www.myspace.com/boeko

PredamnOvakill uttered
Wed, 23/04/2008 - 9:43am
Thanks for the

Thanks for the comment/critique Smiling