Undiscovered

the first 15 seconds.... i was thinking i was gonna be in for a good song... like someone told me... i will tell you, it needs to be simplified... its too confusing, so yeah make it less complex and all over the place if you get my drift? if it was more simple it would be a pretty good song. the bass was good, but i found it to hard to keep with the rhythm really..., but its a good effort bud

Well it's certainly different to a lot of the content on this site and worth the time to listen to. The influences are there but it doesn't feel like an imitation. To be frank at this stage I'd say its a 3 star due to the sonic quality of the overall mixdown but the concept itself is worth the extra star. I think the placement of sounds is where you need to concentrate. There is a decent spread but I'd like some more depth and perhaps some motion in both. Using some flanging at low wet settings or setting a chorus out of phase and automating it to fall in and out would be my suggestion, this would enhance the sound as well as giving it more space. I'd even suggest getting more intricate with the edit, I realize its already quite complicated but i think this sound lends itself to micro-detailing.