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Hi buddy.I was listening to your track on my laptop so I couldn't talk about the sound quality.     I think the main rythm is nice, but the song is only that...      only a loop, and the songs even have an intro or outro, so simply you start with the loop and music  goes beyond.Now if the rythm is a loop, you'll have to produce something more to fill, clear and create a intro, a basic line, a climax and some kind of ending.If the main rythm is something you produce, then, you could move the elements until the arives to a climax in the song and the art of give movement will be easier.Think in your songs as a history you want to tell...   you can not only tell  "if the hero rescued the princess"  because all the people will ask "who's te man? who's the princess, and why the F%ck is he a hero!" 

You have material, now, you'll have to do something to that to create a song.

Good luck!